Wednesday, 20 February 2019

The beach carter 2019 literacy moment in time.

I see the beautiful,rough,ocean rock back and forward.
I hear the waves smashing onto the dry cracked rocks
I think there might be a shipwreck on the pointy sharp rocks.
I feel the cold and wet wind howl across the beach.
I wonder if the stormy weather will change the small sandy beach

1 comment:

  1. What a great little poem Carter I love it! It's short but very descriptive and you've used lots of interesting words. If there was a shipwrecked boat on those pointy sharp rocks, what type of boat do you think it might be? A sailing ship, an old scow or a modern speedboat?

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